I love outsider POV on the boys, and the fact it was Lenore, 1000% even better!

I'm not a big Jo fan, but this was nice - just her, not her mom or anyone else, on her own, finding her way. Plus, the compelling with Lenore, that was very nice. AND, you added Benny - that was Benny, right? Since we saw him as a bartender so very long ago. Great job!